thoughts penned during war (Afghanistan)
Thursday, April 14, 2005 | 1 comments
bySumanya Anand Velamur
Wearing my opinion on my sleeve
A little label 4" long , 3" wide
In a little place in the world
Where I'll neither be seen nor heard
The place has claims to injustice too
I did not protest with any label blue
Against the riots so near.
So why now and why here?
Is it because it is someone else?
A war somewhere else?
Easier to blame than to be blamed?
Stand up for people you don't know unashamed?
In the bus I elicit smiles from a few people
With my opinion on the label
Perhaps they think, what a wannabe
Perhaps they think, In time she will see.
For a time I muse, Perhaps I AM a wannabe.
Perhaps, in time, I WILL see.
Is this what this is all about?
A faint flickering flame swiftly snuffed out!
Further along, in an un-peopled path, a child
Looks as if to plead, Pray, stay wild.
There is no place for musings now
Youth is all about the here and the now.
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1 Comments:
Nice. Freeflowing, simple, it enters straight into the heart with its contrasted emotions. The diffrerent dilemmas are beautifully raised and put down. One thing, wont 'unabashed' be more appropriate than 'unashamed'?
-Prabhu
By Malik Hakem al-Baqara, at April 17, 2005 12:36 AM
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